Wednesday, 19 November 2014

second story line

STORY LINE 
 A women in a psychiatrist hospital, The woman is presented as a dark and confused character who ends up in a hospital that is for mental health patients.  psychiatrist nurse or doctor comes in trying to understand what has made her come into a place like this. She puts a folder on the doctors desk and asks if there is any jobs going, the doctor looks on edge and feels the need to give her a cleaning job. one of the flash back includes her holding her baby ( rocking back forth, normal mum) this is so that the audience starts to wonder what has happened to her and her baby also question why.
Another flashback could include strong white lights starting the scene off by flashing in her house while she is cleaning the toilets. She washes her face with cold water and looks up in the mirror with a sinister look; making the audience question her motive. As weeks went on weird things started to happen. more doctors started to go missing and many patients " killed themselves." the chair men of the hospital promoted the lady to look after these patients. One misty dark night, foot steps began to appear on the mental ward. As she was walking down she opened the door to what seemed to be a patients room. her dark black eyes camouflaged with the darkness, her heavy breathing started to spook the patient! a loud scream which made the women get another flash back of a child crying with terror and she saw herself shouting "don't take my baby" an extreme close up of an eye that is not human (alien eye) then the next shot starts off with a close up of her eye.. implying that these are memories of what she has seen. When she wakes up next morning, she finds herself in a room secured with locks on her window and door. Doctor enters " Im afraid you are now a patient this mental hospital" he said in a sly jolly voice.

Characters 
The doctor ( Dr philips)
The woman (undecided because i am deciding on a spooky name)
alien ( zorak)

Settings
house
psychiatrist hospital
flash backs could involve a scene outside.

Genre 
horror/ sci fi

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